“Home, sweet home” is a phrase that express an essential
attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the
family house is sweet or no sweet, the cherished ideal of home _____1_____
has great importance for many people.
This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream,
dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers
of American West, was to find a piece of place, build a house _____2_____
for one’s family, and started a farm. These small households were _____3_____
portraits of independence: the entire family- mother, father, children,
even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to _____4_____
support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5_____
of family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the
United States no longer live on farms, but the ideal of home ownership _____6_____
is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.
When U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ, for example, _____7_____
they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8_____
a tremendous boom in home building. The new houses, typically in
the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied _____9_____
a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their _____10_____
way of life.
參考答案及解析:
1 將no改為 not
2 將place改為land
place是可數名詞,作“地方”講,而land意為“土地,田地”是不可數名詞。例如:
Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.
當你偶爾光顧時,獨處是一個美妙的境地,但是如果久留,它卻是一個糟糕的地方。
There is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.
3 將started改為start
start應使用不定式,以和前面的find,build一致。
4 將working改為work。
work應該用第三人稱復數,和live一致。另外,family在這里作“家人”講,是復數。
5 將anyone改為everyone
這里是要用everyone指每個人,而不是要用anyone泛指。
6 將but刪除
7將before改為after
根據上下文判斷,這里要表達的是二戰之后。
8 將But改為 And
根據語意,這里要表達的是遞進關系,而不是轉折關系。例如:
When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. And that’s my religion.
當我行善事,我感到坦然;當我行惡時,我感到內疚。這就是我的人生之道。
9 將it改為they
10 在house the中間加入介詞as
regard…as 作“把……當作……”講。
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